by Elizabeth S. Craig
Crutch words are a funny thing. When I first started seriously writing, in the early 2000s, the overused words I leaned on were different from the ones I have now. Kind of shocking to me is the fact that I still use them at all. I’ve been writing long enough that you’d think I’d recognize what I’m doing as soon as I type one. But it rarely happens, probably because I’m in the zone and pushing words forward.
When I’m editing my books, I notice most of my crutch words seem to occur when I’m grasping for the right word or phrase. It’s like a written um. Which also surprises me. You’d think I’d simply stop typing and sit there until the word came to me.
My usual crutch words are a little, just, that, had, started and some. After my first draft, I eliminate a good number of them. And my betas and editor slash the others.
I’ve gotten sensitive enough to the words that I notice them in other writers’ books, too. They stand out to me like neon signs and take me out of whatever book I’m reading.
If you’re having a tough time identifying your crutch words, there are a couple of good ways to find them. One is by letting your draft sit for about a week, then come back to it with fresh eyes. You could also try reading your manuscript aloud, which also works well. Or you could send your draft to someone else. Beta readers catch these overused words easily.
For more ideas on common crutch words, read this article by Jessica Page Morrell on the Insecure Writer’s Support Group.
Do you have any pet crutch words? Do you notice them as a reader?
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I still overuse just.
I have a list of commonly overused words and once I've finished a manuscript, I do a search for each one to see if I overused it.
Keeping a list is a great idea!
I think we all have crutch words, Elizabeth. I know I do. Some of mine are <i>scoop</i>, <i>nodded</i>, and <i>headed</i> (as in heading in a certain direction). The more I catch them in my writing, though, the more ways I learn to express myself, and I suppose that's a good thing!
I’m rather fond of “headed,” too!
Hi Elizabeth
Great post as always.
Mine is 'Just"
Just can't seem to stop overusing it.
Mike Martin
Another vote for “just” as a filler word! There’s *just* something about it. :)
I try to watch for overused words and the no-no words we're not supposed to use. Right now I'm really working on not using "that" so much. It's a crutch word in my dialogue that I have to revise and eliminate.
It’s amazing how little we actually need “that” in our writing!
I have many crutch words, such as knew and know, look, and starting a sentence with So. While some I catch during each draft, I catch many more when I run my manuscript through ProWritingAid. That includes not merely my typical crutch words, but repetition of words or phrases unique to that story.
I often do the same. It does a good job catching echoes.
My characters are nodding and looking a lot. If you took "then" and "that" from me, I'd lose a lot of word count (did I mention how much I am looking forward to editing?)
The strangest crutch word I ever came across was from this book on Mao and Maoism I read a few years ago. Great book, but using "Manicheanism" that many times took me out of the narrative :-D
😂 A word like Manicheanism would definitely do it!!
Oh my goodness, my characters are such nodders and lookers. I totally get that.